1st paragraph: Try to come up with a less cliché thesis and make sure I integrate it with my body paragraphs.
2nd paragraph: I need to add more quotes and expand on Elizabeth and how one should follow the middle path.
3rd paragraph: Needs to be integrated better with the rest of my essay by also including the Bennet's marriage. Also need to get rid of the background information of Dr. King and go straight into the analysis.
4th paragraph: Need to create one (Possibly about Jane)
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